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Like if someone wanted to display a corpse in a class coffee suspend coffin. Also unreservedly creepy.



Is bad luck to display a body @ home?

I'm having the hardest time making this even a little interesting, so I would appreciate any and all critique.Thanks a lot.EYES IN THE SKY:Scott stared at the blueprints in front of him. He now realized there was a reason no one had tried to take Harrison down before – he knew exactly what he was doing. The maze of faded lines on the field of blue made his head pound. He stashed the prints, grabbed his coat and trudged out of the house.It felt nice to be out on the streets – something Scott hadn’t done in days. He inhaled the fresh air and looked around him. The streets were crowded which was typical of a Saturday afternoon.