“So, you–” “Laura!” They both overripe to descry Laura’s boss...

“So, you–” “Laura!” They both turned to discern Laura’s big gun, Jonnie overt at her. “Gotta go!” Laura said. “Bye,” Scott voiced, smiling. He watched Jonnie scowl increased by wag his finger at Laura yet again. This wasn’t the first spell Laura had gotten into bother at work and Scott knew that this wasn’t the last. He couldn’t see her face, but he imagined Laura with a sheepish grin plastered on her image. Jonnie shrugged and Scott watched Laura hurry missing to the more side of the cafe. He sipped his coffee and thought about what his subsequent operation would be. His friends would be home tonight and they’d expect toward hear a plan. Always the calm and serene one, Scott had no idea what he would effect this session. Sighing, he dauntless to skip the donut and leaving some money forth the table, stood up. He could see Laura at the present time or moment. She looked up at him and raised her eyebrows. He just shrugged, waved and headed out the door.Melissa -- Yes, the underscores are for italics. :)As for Jonnie castigation Laura, it's explained later in the story but I didn't meditate that it would be snabled (up) at this aim. I'm gonna adaptation that. :)Thanks everyone.



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was mates with a guy in work for ages he was engaged and we were friends i liked him but knew nothing could happen. After a year of knowing him he started acting differently towards me - started texting me out the blue,talk to me ages on chat,was quite touchy say stuff to me like how i wasnt just any girl and how i didnt need any beauty sleep,kept asking me to go for a drink with him. Saying how if we went out he wouldnt be able to keep his hands off me or behave, Yet he would say stuff like he enjoyed my company so u can understand why i felt i was getting mixed signals!We did meet up twice once for coffee and the second occasion we went for a repast when on the way home we spent the time cuddling but apart from a bit of flirtyness we didnt do anything else. I was hoping he would tell me how he felt as i wasnt sure what he was after as he would in addition say stuff like how i trouble except (for) he didnt be familiar with how much and that if i went for a drink id be wealthy dwelling-place with him.. Im a bemnant niave i be acquainted with exclusive of was gullible as well. So i was in a predicament. Suddennly the texts,the phonecalls just the way he was turned hard-hearted and i knew something was up - he'd met a girl at a party and a week ensuing he dumped his fiance added to the girl dumped her live up to date partner.